ext_311167 ([identity profile] yuletart-mods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] yuletart2009-12-17 04:46 pm

Giftart for mashimero!

Title: Offworld Team Camping
Gift for: [livejournal.com profile] mashimero
Artist: [livejournal.com profile] ratcreature
Rating:: G
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Characters: John Sheppard/Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan, Ronon Dex
Warnings: None
Artist notes: mashimero asked for fluffy, happy team bonding scenes, and for gen or McShep, so this is a team scene, with very mild McShep cuddling. It's done in ink and acrylic paint on paper.
Summary: John, Rodney, Teyla and Ronon are making S'mores.

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[personal profile] fangirlism 2009-12-17 10:10 pm (UTC)(link)
The colors really flow well on this. It's very pretty.
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 04:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, I'm glad the colors work. It wasn't easy for me to evoke the feeling of firelight, especially as I did not want it very dark.
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[identity profile] isiscolo.livejournal.com 2009-12-17 10:32 pm (UTC)(link)
S'MORES!

And for some reason the thing that really stands out to me are their boots. You do very nice boots.
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[identity profile] ieke85.livejournal.com 2009-12-18 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
I noticed the boots first, too! I like them. :D

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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 04:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I actually had a hard time with the laces, because I kept getting confused with the over/under pattern, even though I looked at my own and at reference photos of bootlaces. I'm glad it paid off.
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[identity profile] nextian.livejournal.com 2009-12-18 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
The painting sets a really nice mood, and I love John & Rodney's expressions.
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 04:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I'm glad to hear the mood works. I had a hard time with the firelight at first.

[identity profile] tripperfunster.livejournal.com 2009-12-18 01:11 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh watercolours! Very nice! So many details to see!
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I'm glad the details work for you. I tried to make the scene look real and lived in without it being too cluttered.
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. It's great to hear the happy team sentiment came through.

[identity profile] mashimero.livejournal.com 2009-12-18 04:19 am (UTC)(link)
OMG! I love Rodney's hand resting on John's chest, and they way that everyone looks so comfortable and relaxed. You've put a wonderful amount of detail into it, and I love the colouring, the warm glow of the campfire.

And you even have them making s'mores</i! Another one of my favourite things! Thank you mystery artist! &hearts;
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 05:13 pm (UTC)(link)
I am glad you like your gift, and that it matches what you wanted. I wanted to make it look a lived in scene like out of a narrative so I put in all these details I imagined at a campside (I actually never made s'mores, they just aren't eaten here), and tried to convey the campfire light impression in color without making it too dark. So I'm happy to hear this worked for you.

BTW, if you like, I could send you the hi-resolution scan of this via email, so that you could have it in printing quality and see the detail.

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[identity profile] leyna55.livejournal.com 2009-12-18 10:20 am (UTC)(link)
Ronon and Teyla look to be having a really interesting conversation there, which makes me wonder what they are discussing (hatching a prank, perhaps?). John and Rodney look very relaxed and happy.I like your attention to detail - the food, and camping supplies and (as mentioned) boots!
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 05:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I wanted to make it look like part of a narrative and give it a real feel of things happening, so I included the little details. I'm glad this worked.

[identity profile] chkc.livejournal.com 2009-12-18 02:47 pm (UTC)(link)
The colouring and the textures of this piece are wonderful! There are so many lovely details. I especially liked the fire and the circle of light it casts compared with the dark blue forest. (And the fact that everyone is happy and smiling.) :)
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 05:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad the happy team feeling I was going for comes across, and that the firelight works. It was quite hard for me to paint fire, so I'm happy it worked out for the mood.
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[identity profile] reflectedeve.livejournal.com 2009-12-18 04:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Gosh, this is cozy. :D I love the sense of place, here: all the little campsite details (the bag of marshmallows is awesome), the warm colors in the circle around the fire, and the cool, darker shades of the forest behind them. There's a great mood to the piece! Posing's pretty great too, and Teyla looks like she really can't wait to eat that marshmallow.. ;)
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 05:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I was trying to convey a sense of narrative, and making scene look real and lived in with the details, so I'm glad to hear this worked for you. And it was the first time I tried to paint such firelight, so it's great to hear the mood works.

[identity profile] longleggedgit.livejournal.com 2009-12-18 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I haven't seen SGA but this is great--there's so much to look at! I love all the details. And dude, you drew the sole of that boot awesomely. :D
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 05:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! The soles of the boots were certainly easier than the laces. I kept getting tangled up in the over/under pattern of those, loosing the place (when I thought I had mastered the shoelace principle with five... lol)

[identity profile] chrismm.livejournal.com 2009-12-18 06:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I really like the atmosphere of this--the colors, the detail, the texture, all make it so cozy and warm.
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 05:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. This was the first time I tried painting campfire light, so I'm happy to hear the atmosphere works.

[identity profile] kaiserkuchen.livejournal.com 2009-12-19 01:26 am (UTC)(link)
The warm, cozy and companionable mood set in this piece and all the little, well-thought out details really make this stand out to me, even if I'm not exactly in SGA fandom. John and Rodney's pose looks loving and comfortable, and now I just wish I could have some S'mores, too ♥
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 05:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it even though it isn't your fandom. I've never actually eaten (or even seen) any s'mores myself. The first time I encountered them in fic I was so confused. So I'm glad the details work, even though my knowledge of them comes only from the internet. *g*

[identity profile] dramedy.livejournal.com 2009-12-19 03:16 am (UTC)(link)
I love the watercolor look of this. and john/rodney is SO ADORABLE! I love it! :D :D :D
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 05:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm happy to hear that.

[identity profile] ani-bester.livejournal.com 2009-12-20 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
HOLY GOD! The details you got into this are freaking aamzing. The crushed beer can! Heck, that's awesome. All the little touches (the boots, you got the ringlets on the boots! Wow!)Great art!
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 05:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad to hear the details work for you. I wanted to give it a lived in, real feeling of a camp site, and a sense of narrative, so I included all the little stuff like open packages, a crushed can and so on.

[identity profile] kittehkat.livejournal.com 2009-12-20 09:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Smores! OH, this is so snuggly! It reminds me of the very best picture books, it's done in such a thorough and color-rich style. You took a lot of dull, boring colors (lots of blacks and browns thanks to nature and uniforms)and made them vibrant and varied and just a beautiful mix. The fire is particularly stunning.
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 05:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I'm so glad to hear the colors work for you. This was the first time I tried to paint a campfire, so it wasn't easy for me, and I felt quite apprehensive about the effects.

[identity profile] rane-ab.livejournal.com 2009-12-20 10:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, this is so adorable! Agreed with the people above: you draw really nice boots; they immediately jumped out for me. Also love the fire, and, for some reason, John's hair. :D
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 05:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad you like the fire, because that was the first time I really tried to paint one, so it's good to hear it works.
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[identity profile] bossymarmalade.livejournal.com 2009-12-23 04:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Making s'mores, hee! The idea of Ronon dealing with them makes me very happy. *g* Nice work!
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 05:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I actually never had s'mores myself (they aren't eaten here afaik), but they together with the camping are something of a fanon staple, so that it immediately came to mind when seeing the request for fluffy team bonding.

[identity profile] leochi.livejournal.com 2009-12-23 06:32 pm (UTC)(link)
What a lovely and cosy scene! And I really like your use of colours, well done!
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 05:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! This was the first time I tried painting a campfire scene, so I'm glad to hear the colors work for you.

[identity profile] glockgal.livejournal.com 2010-01-03 08:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Nawww totally bonding moment! Love the details of their s'mores food and cans of soda, as well as their boots and omg issat a cooler? XD
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 06:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, that is a cooler for the cans that they have somehow brought across the galaxy to Pegasus along with their plastic water bottles. Seriously while the camping is fanon, beer in cans is canon (like you can see them in the Shrine) just like the plastic bottles, which makes little sense, but that is SGA for you. *g*

I'm glad the details work for you. I tried to make the scene real and make it look like a scene from a story.

[identity profile] dualbunny.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 04:06 am (UTC)(link)
The detail in this is *so cool*. You thought of everything! And they look so happy. :D
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-04 06:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm happy you like the detail. I had hoped it would make the scene look more real, and not just clutter the picture. And it's great to hear the happy mood comes across.
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[identity profile] oxoniensis.livejournal.com 2010-01-05 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I love all the little details, and the cozy feel of this. Lovely.
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-01-05 09:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad it feels cozy to you.

[identity profile] zelempa.livejournal.com 2010-09-26 12:58 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, this is lovely -- I love the whimsical style, all the details, the soft colors. Such a warm and comfy scene!
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[personal profile] ratcreature 2010-09-26 02:09 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.