ext_311167 ([identity profile] yuletart-mods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] yuletart2009-12-28 07:55 am

Art for Yhlee!

Title: Ghost of a Chance
Gift for: [livejournal.com profile] yhlee
Artist: [livejournal.com profile] inknose
Rating:: PG
Fandom: Fray: Future Slayer
Characters: Melaka Fray, Harth Fray
Warnings: little bit o' comic book violence
Artist notes: Happy holidays to yhlee!! Funny story - in scouring the internet for reference pictures (I actually don't have my copy of 'Fray' with me at the moment, so excuse any character design elements that I may have totally forgotten) one of the first things I came across... was a fic by you. Why is Fray fandom so tiny!?!
(Also, to clear up some possible confusion... in the second to last panel, Harth is making a getaway in some flying van driven by his lurk cronies. Or something. Make up your own plot XD)
Summary: One more time Melaka doesn't kill her brother.



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[personal profile] fangirlism 2009-12-28 04:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Gorgeous, but I think the mods forgot to change the URL on the second image. Here it is! ^^
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[personal profile] fangirlism 2009-12-28 09:35 pm (UTC)(link)
XD We've all been there
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[identity profile] inknose.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Huzzah, I'm so glad that you like it!! And thank you for your prompts, because I probably never would have gotten around to something like this otherwise, but I something inside me clearly needed to draw angsty Fray fanart ;D

[identity profile] leochi.livejournal.com 2009-12-28 09:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Really lovely work! :)))

[identity profile] inknose.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:02 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you! right back atcha ;)

[identity profile] longleggedgit.livejournal.com 2009-12-28 09:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooooh, this is really awesome! You have such a distinct style, I love the linework. :) Makes me wish I knew the fandom so I could appreciate the characterization more, but you tell a good story in the comic format, so I feel like it doesn't even matter almost. :)

[identity profile] inknose.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:04 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks, that's good to hear. mandatory GO CHECK IT OUT, FRAY IS AWESOME

[identity profile] longleggedgit.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:22 pm (UTC)(link)
I'll check it out! I love good comics. :)

[identity profile] dramedy.livejournal.com 2009-12-28 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
IDK the fandom particularly well, but this comic makes me want to go find more! and I love the color and the dynamics and just. yeah, this is pretty AWESOME!

[identity profile] inknose.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
dooo it! ;D and thank you so much!

[identity profile] chen-san.livejournal.com 2009-12-29 09:54 am (UTC)(link)
That's really an amazing style, you've got there! Great job!

[identity profile] inknose.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks! XD I am sitting here laughing my ass off at your icon, just btw.
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[identity profile] nebst.livejournal.com 2009-12-29 08:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Don't know the fandom, so I have ... no idea what's going on, really, but this is gorgeously done.

[identity profile] inknose.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:07 pm (UTC)(link)
haha, well I'm glad you enjoyed anyway :) thank you!

[identity profile] laurashapiro.livejournal.com 2009-12-30 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful work.

[identity profile] inknose.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:09 pm (UTC)(link)
♥ thanks!

[identity profile] a2zmom.livejournal.com 2009-12-30 11:47 pm (UTC)(link)
I love Fray and I absolutely love this! I always felt that Fray was a perfect melding of art and story and you've captured that here without many words. I love how vulnerable Harth looks at first, and then we see him hardening into what he is now.

[identity profile] inknose.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:11 pm (UTC)(link)
aww, what a nice thing to say! I'm so glad you liked it. Harth's evilface turned out to be one of my favorite parts as well ;)
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[identity profile] isiscolo.livejournal.com 2009-12-31 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
I don't know this fandom, but this is amazingly well done.

[identity profile] inknose.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:12 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you!!

[identity profile] chrismm.livejournal.com 2009-12-31 06:02 am (UTC)(link)
Excellent--I love the colors and the gorgeous linework, and even without really knowing the story, I feel like I know the story just from reading this, if that makes any sense at all.

[identity profile] inknose.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:14 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you so much - as an aspiring comic book artist, that is such a wonderful compliment to get :3

[identity profile] ani-bester.livejournal.com 2010-01-01 04:04 pm (UTC)(link)
ohhh great sequence work and character design.
Love the facial expressions.

Nice job!

[identity profile] inknose.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:18 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you so much! though I can't take credit for the design so much, Fray is so badass to begin with there wasn't much left for me to do ;D
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[identity profile] red-eft.livejournal.com 2010-01-02 01:16 am (UTC)(link)
This is awesome! I love the sense of motion, especially in the first two panels.

[identity profile] inknose.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:19 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you! that's something I'm still trying to improve upon, I think, but it's nice to hear!

[identity profile] glockgal.livejournal.com 2010-01-03 11:49 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG the angst, poor Melaka! Why do Slayers always have to make such hard choices, the poor things! Love the story that plays out and how even I the reader feels suckered in by Harth's trickery. Great pacing, action scenes and colouring. LOVE how you do the poignant gradient lighting in the last panel - really exemplifies Melaka's feeling of loneliness and despair. Awww *hugs her*

[identity profile] inknose.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:23 pm (UTC)(link)
*pets the Slayers* Because Joss likes to cause us all pain? ;____;

yay, thanks! I was hoping that there would be a sense of surprise or of being duped on the reader's part as well, but I wasn't sure if I'd pulled it off at all. aghgh just thanks so much for your lovely comment :3

[identity profile] dualbunny.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 05:31 am (UTC)(link)
Beautiful little comic--emotionally and visually. I especially love that inset of her eyes. It says so much, and your line work is so very expressive.

[identity profile] inknose.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:24 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you so much ♥
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[identity profile] bossymarmalade.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Fantastic comic-book setup and art -- the relationship between the two comes across so clearly, even though I don't know the characters. Good job!

[identity profile] inknose.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks! they're such great characters, it was a lot of fun :)

[identity profile] cornish-pixies.livejournal.com 2010-01-07 12:35 am (UTC)(link)
It would help if you were at least a little good at art and if you were drawing things I actually cared about, but aside from that I guess this is ok.....

JK I LOVE YOU. this is going on my wall.