ext_311167 ([identity profile] yuletart-mods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] yuletart2008-12-23 10:28 am
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Giftart for Alouette_Sparra!

Title: Alas, poor Yorick
Gift for: [livejournal.com profile] alouette_sparra
Artist: [livejournal.com profile] moment_of_sen
Rating:: G
Fandom: Iron Man (movie)
Characters: Tony Stark
Warnings: None
Artist notes: I was working on something else and I wasn't
happy with it, so I started over with a better reference. I'm quite
pleased with this effort though. I was trying for a sort of
Tony&Jarvis angle- you know it's really hard to slash a disembodied
voice? =) I hope you like it anyway!
Summary: Tony waxes lyrical; Jarvis is more sane.


[identity profile] noelleno.livejournal.com 2008-12-23 06:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha, that's amusing. Nice dialogue. cx
ext_872: eye with red flower petals as eyelashes (that's when i have to lie down)

[identity profile] bossymarmalade.livejournal.com 2008-12-23 06:41 pm (UTC)(link)
What a novel idea! I love the colours you chose for this, and the casual, realistic-yet-comicbooky style for Tony. The whole thing is so laid-back and relaxed but conveys a lot, right down to the understated but perfect background. Wondermous stuff!

[identity profile] dreamlittleyo.livejournal.com 2008-12-23 06:42 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this! It's awesome and beautifully done!

[identity profile] melisus.livejournal.com 2008-12-23 06:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha, that's great! It's a great little snapshot moment for the image and the dialogue is well done. And I completely read the dialogue hearing Jarvis' lines in Paul Bettany's voice.
florahart: (cheerleading)

[personal profile] florahart 2008-12-23 07:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahahaha! :D

[identity profile] karasu-hime.livejournal.com 2008-12-23 07:36 pm (UTC)(link)
OH nice and funny!

[identity profile] alouette-sparra.livejournal.com 2008-12-23 07:41 pm (UTC)(link)
The artwork is amazing, and I'm grinning like mad at the dialogue. It's very funny. Thank you ever so much! (And, if you draw other art, as soon as I find out who you are you may have an art stalker. ;) )

[identity profile] ria-oaks.livejournal.com 2008-12-23 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, that's great... love the art, and cute dialogue. I could totally hear both of them. :)

[identity profile] echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com 2008-12-23 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Ohhh adorable portrait ! Usually I'm not fond of Robert Downey Jr but your interpretation is really really cute !

[identity profile] kaptainsnot.livejournal.com 2008-12-23 09:11 pm (UTC)(link)
I love the funny dialogue, and the clever memento mori. Also the glow of his mini arc reactor :B.

[identity profile] soda-and-capes.livejournal.com 2008-12-23 09:21 pm (UTC)(link)
I am pretty happy that this exists in life. ♥

[identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com 2008-12-24 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
Would you like to know how in love with you I am just because you got the line from Hamlet correct? If I see one more person misquote it "I knew him well" there will be MURDER. Oh, and the art's awesome too! :D

[identity profile] unithien-rerith.livejournal.com 2008-12-24 02:17 am (UTC)(link)
That line about Tony making Jarvis a suit so that he can be a real boy? Something he would so totally say. *hoping for it to make it into the next move*

[identity profile] sae.livejournal.com 2008-12-24 06:34 am (UTC)(link)
FULL OF WIN.

[identity profile] 22by7.livejournal.com 2008-12-24 05:48 pm (UTC)(link)
this? is PERFECT. and also feels like an actual outtake from the movie. and i love that you got RDJ's ickle NOSE so right.

[identity profile] florence-craye.livejournal.com 2008-12-24 11:16 pm (UTC)(link)
tee hee hee! Very nice!

[identity profile] rasetsunyo.livejournal.com 2008-12-25 12:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! Amusing and beautiful!

[identity profile] kaiserkuchen.livejournal.com 2008-12-26 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Cute idea and awesome dialogue, heeee ♥ O TONES.

[identity profile] gardendoor.livejournal.com 2008-12-27 09:42 am (UTC)(link)
*snicker* I love the dialogue, the resemblance, and the naturalness of the pose! It all comes together so well.

[identity profile] bookshop.livejournal.com 2008-12-31 03:23 am (UTC)(link)

God you are so fucking good. ImageImageImage Tony is so hot here. Forearms. Greenness. SEXY IRON MAN HELMET. ilu Image

[identity profile] glockgal.livejournal.com 2008-12-31 05:54 pm (UTC)(link)
My god, I can hear it all in my head as I was reading it. I love how funny and yet almost how...sad it is? But in a good way, because it's Tony and he needs to balance out his playboy richness with a bit of loneliness. Love how well you drew him, so accurate to both movie!Tony and comicbook!Tony and his pose is so relaxed and cocky, it's perfect!

[identity profile] beadattitude.livejournal.com 2008-12-31 10:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, wow. I can just hear both of them! HEEEE.

[identity profile] aybara-max.livejournal.com 2009-01-01 07:11 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG, not only is buff Tony with glowy heart AWESOMELY GORGEOUS with hair falling in his eyes and perfect facial hair.... the keyboard and snappy dialogue is adorable. The voices are absolutely perfect. PERFECT.

WELL DONE.

[identity profile] moment-of-sen.livejournal.com 2009-01-05 06:22 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you like it =D I do do other stuff but it's sporadic how often I post it...